A few weeks ago I began using the Words for Wednesday Challenge from Delores at Under the Porch Light to create a story, The Papalo Cure. Readers commented, requesting to know what happened to Grandpa after Maria got on the bus to South Dakota. I didn't know! The plot of this story is being directed by the weekly Words for Wednesday word prompt!
Using the prompts, I have been adding to the story - and even I am surprised by the turns it has taken.
This week’s chapter can be read without background information, but I recommend reading the proceeding parts of this series first. Start with Part 1: Facing Insurmountable Odds. A link for each previous chapter is on my FICTION page. This week's challenge words are listed at the end of this chapter and highlighted in bold in the story.
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Image: Rig capable of drilling for either oil or natural gas. (1957)
Photo credit: Bob Cowper |
Maria looked
across the hospital room at its two other remaining occupants. Mateo appeared worried and he was glaring at her; Cynthia had
her arms crossed and looked smug.
Maria
sighed. “Mateo, you have to believe me. I did trick Grandpa into thinking watercress was papalo, but only because I knew he believed he needed papalo to get better after surgery. It worked -
didn't it? After he ate some of it he finally signed the
surgical consent.”
“Oh, it
worked, all right”, said Mateo, looking a little crazed. “If Grandpa bleeds to death during
surgery it will be clear that you intended to kill him. You will have caused his death just as surely as if
you had hired a professional marksman.”
“What? I had no idea watercress could interfere with
clotting! Why are you so convinced I want him dead? I love Grandpa!” Maria's
last words sounded choked up, as she began to cry.
“You may love
your grandfather, but you clearly love the idea of acquiring a fortune even
more,” Cynthia said icily.
Maria inhaled sharply and said, “What are you
talking about? This idea of a paleontologist buying the farm so he can dig up dinosaur
skeletons in our cove is crazy. Mateo, we both used to call Grandpa a spinner of tales, teller of dreams.
You can't really think the story he told us about the Mastodon bones left
such an indelible impression upon me that I still believe in it?”
“That was
Mateo's original theory, before he hired me,” Cynthia explained. “But it didn't take long for me to figure
out that although your get-rich scheme sort of involves dinosaurs - it does so in the form of fossil fuel, not
skeletal bones. I found out all about the petroleum and natural gas company to whom you are planning to sell your grandparents farm!”
“The plan you came up with was quite stellar, but
you are not going to get away with it,” said Mateo. “You can't sign the
final paperwork for the sale, though, as long as you are here. Before you return to Mexico, I will see to it that the deal does not go through, unless Grandma and Grandpa decide they want
it to. Even if they do decide to sell the farm, the payment will certainly not belong to you. How did you get the petroleum
company interested in the property anyway - or was it their idea to contact you?”
Suddenly they
all realized that Grandma had returned. Maria
wondered how long she had been standing in the doorway, and what she had heard.
“Grandma,” Maria cried out. “What did the doctors say, did eating watercress harm Grandpa?”
“The watercress isn't a big deal - they said it probably wouldn't act as a blood thinner, unless he had consumed a lot more and over a longer period of time. They will watch him and give medicine if his blood seems too thin. But - - what did I just hear? What is all this about a petroleum company?” asked Grandma.
“Grandma,”
said Mateo gently. “I know you think I
have been acting paranoid, but I have been investigating a serious issue that could have devastating consequences.”
He continued, “I
am not mentally infirm, nor the imbecile you all believe me to be. In fact, my mental health is
much more sound than any of you realize.
I have never been mentally unstable. Back in my senior year of high school, I
allowed you all to think I had a psychiatric illness. I really just agreed to seeing a psychiatrist
so I could get some help with some substance abuse issues I was having at the
time. It was a perfect scenario -
Grandpa paid for the visits, the psychiatrist kept my treatment issues
confidential, and none of you found out I had been using illegal substances.”
“¡Carumba!
Good Heavens,” said Grandma loudly. “Do you
still do drugs?”
“Of course
not,” said Mateo. “None at all since I
was in treatment. Grandpa got his
money's worth.”
In a softer voice, Grandma said, “If your mind
is sound, why would you accuse your sister of wanting to kill Grandpa? And what were you saying about a petroleum
company? What does that have to do with
anything?” Grandma made her way to the chair Maria had vacated and sat down,
looking thoroughly perplexed.
“Let me
explain,” said Cynthia. “Before Mateo last visited the farm, he had received a
strange call. A man was asking for
directions to the farm in Mexico, saying he was going out there to do the preliminary
survey before the sale. Mateo assumed he
had a wrong number. But, while Mateo was
in Mexico he caught Maria coming back from the cove very early one morning, and
she acted so strangely it made him begin to wonder what was going on.”
“Of course she was acting strangely - she was coming back from meeting her lover in the cove,” interrupted Grandma.
Cynthia ignored Grandma's comment. “That was
when Mateo hired me to go to Mexico and investigate,” Cynthia continued. “People
in the village informed me that representatives from a company, called PetroNation Oil and Gas, had been asking a lot of
questions about the farm. I got their
number, and pretended to be ‘Ms. Bedoya.’ They didn't even question my identity, and revealed they were about to offer a very large sum to purchase the entire property. The plan, apparently, is to
demolish the buildings and drill for oil right where the house and barn currently stand.”
“What?” gasped
Maria. “That is my home! I would never consent to such a plan. But - ” She looked baffled. “What would any of this have to do with my
wanting Grandpa to die?”
“I assume,” Mateo said, “that you thought he would interfere with the sale, or keep all the
money for himself. Greed has led to
murder more than once.”
Grandma was
looking pale. She appeared blindsided by the plan that had been revealed. Suddenly, though,
she looked very angry and stood up.
She said, “Maria,
lo siento. I am so sorry this accusation has been made against you. Mateo, you have to believe her when she says
she doesn't know anything about any of this. I
understand how you may have come to these conclusions, but I have just figured out what is going on - and Maria is not responsible.”
“¡Dios mio!” Grandma paused, then continued, “Now I am feeling tempted to commit a murder.”
What has Grandma figured out?
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This story is totally fictitious and may not contain accurate factual information. I had never even heard of papalo, until I did an Internet search for “indigenous plants of Mexico.”
The Words for Wednesday Challenge supplied the following word prompts:
marksman, stellar, blindsided, indelible, crazed, imbecile
and the phrase
spinner
of tales, teller of dreams.
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