tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4408200542344140440.post2567875577374196268..comments2023-12-18T19:20:00.809-07:00Comments on the most - - of every moment: A Coffee Date and Cathedral WindowsSusan http://www.blogger.com/profile/15294204009310379754noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4408200542344140440.post-80493780264717431992015-07-31T12:53:15.758-06:002015-07-31T12:53:15.758-06:00Ugh - thank you River!! I find using the right nam...Ugh - thank you River!! I find using the right names in a fiction piece can be as hard as it is in person! Thanks for alerting me to my slip-up - I corrected it!Susan https://www.blogger.com/profile/15294204009310379754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4408200542344140440.post-51755912941574091802015-07-31T12:52:13.851-06:002015-07-31T12:52:13.851-06:00Thanks Diane. I like to see people get better inst...Thanks Diane. I like to see people get better instead of worse as well. Maybe that is why I became a nurse!Susan https://www.blogger.com/profile/15294204009310379754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4408200542344140440.post-67596861597926182482015-07-31T12:51:15.325-06:002015-07-31T12:51:15.325-06:00Thanks Rena - not sure this will ever make it to a...Thanks Rena - not sure this will ever make it to a novel length - or even if it can be described as a short story yet? It has been fun to write though!Susan https://www.blogger.com/profile/15294204009310379754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4408200542344140440.post-19220128800462690272015-07-31T12:50:24.298-06:002015-07-31T12:50:24.298-06:00Or Kelly, maybe you are a good judge of character?...Or Kelly, maybe you are a good judge of character?! ;-)Susan https://www.blogger.com/profile/15294204009310379754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4408200542344140440.post-65058081110095742172015-07-31T12:49:45.408-06:002015-07-31T12:49:45.408-06:00Confession. I am not really a tattoo fan - so this...Confession. I am not really a tattoo fan - so this was sort of a stretch for me ... but I suspect a skilled tattoo artist could create something like I was envisioning.Susan https://www.blogger.com/profile/15294204009310379754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4408200542344140440.post-21323016823340228322015-07-31T12:47:35.617-06:002015-07-31T12:47:35.617-06:00Thanks Lana!Thanks Lana!Susan https://www.blogger.com/profile/15294204009310379754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4408200542344140440.post-91969059456169644532015-07-31T03:44:51.259-06:002015-07-31T03:44:51.259-06:00This is very good, I like the way the words flow s...This is very good, I like the way the words flow seamlessly into the story. <br />A little hint though, you have Ryan fixing Mindy's broken window and thinking about...Ryan. instead of Ben<br />quick edit.... :)Riverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14794655013673748992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4408200542344140440.post-33546353610553192822015-07-30T08:46:56.658-06:002015-07-30T08:46:56.658-06:00This is so good! I love seeing people change for t...This is so good! I love seeing people change for the better. You've had my attention the whole way!Diane Stringam Tolleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09629946536985545457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4408200542344140440.post-54666477016400159372015-07-30T08:32:04.585-06:002015-07-30T08:32:04.585-06:00Way to go Susan! I was riveted to see the reason f...Way to go Susan! I was riveted to see the reason for Ryan's change. You used the words brilliantly! You are going to have enough for a book before to long!Renahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12296781992150172086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4408200542344140440.post-19824287820767768962015-07-30T07:19:15.557-06:002015-07-30T07:19:15.557-06:00Clever use of the words here, gal. I especially li...Clever use of the words here, gal. I especially liked that of "viewing" and "hurricane." I am sad though in a way. Like to see Mindy do something quirky again. Perhaps a little slip up? I know, I'm unkind ...Kelly L McKenziehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07649279572727703824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4408200542344140440.post-50419199498409996192015-07-29T15:26:08.871-06:002015-07-29T15:26:08.871-06:00I am pretty certain that Mindy and Ryan will see e...I am pretty certain that Mindy and Ryan will see each other again. <br />I love the way you have used the words this week - and am intrigued by window tatoos.<br />Thank you.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4408200542344140440.post-16687025765059412132015-07-29T11:53:53.890-06:002015-07-29T11:53:53.890-06:00Aww...such a sweet love story developing. I love ...Aww...such a sweet love story developing. I love your use of the words this time!My New Happyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00912544717011410371noreply@blogger.com